Comments on: sunday scribblings: fantasy http://bleedingespresso.com/2007/01/sunday-scribblings-fantasy.html Thu, 20 Nov 2008 09:01:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Inconsequential http://bleedingespresso.com/2007/01/sunday-scribblings-fantasy.html#comment-475 Inconsequential Tue, 23 Jan 2007 09:40:00 +0000 http://siteground218.com/~bleedin2/?p=67#comment-475 poignant.<br /><br />well written, smooth and emotive.<br />A very good short, or an excellent start to something bigger.<br /><br />Go with it some more :) poignant.

well written, smooth and emotive.
A very good short, or an excellent start to something bigger.

Go with it some more :)

]]> By: bella http://bleedingespresso.com/2007/01/sunday-scribblings-fantasy.html#comment-473 bella Tue, 23 Jan 2007 03:00:00 +0000 http://siteground218.com/~bleedin2/?p=67#comment-473 It's really good! I loved reading this.<br />Now, I'm going to read about the evil eye. It’s really good! I loved reading this.
Now, I’m going to read about the evil eye.

]]> By: sognatrice http://bleedingespresso.com/2007/01/sunday-scribblings-fantasy.html#comment-470 sognatrice Mon, 22 Jan 2007 18:08:00 +0000 http://siteground218.com/~bleedin2/?p=67#comment-470 Wow, thanks for the compliments :) <br /><br />I started writing about this little girl (who in my mind I called Beth) years ago, but never got past the first few (not so good) paragraphs. At the time, it was one of those "just sit down and write what comes to mind" days. When I saw the "fantasy" topic this week, I remembered Beth fantasizing about being a child underneath her tree and the rest of it wrote itself. Then I edited of course ;)<br /><br />Now that it's written though, it's occurred to me that it could be part of something bigger...like an old journal entry of a now adult? I certainly wouldn't be up to the challenge of writing as a pre-teen for chapters!<br /><br />Thanks again for the feedback. Wow, thanks for the compliments :)

I started writing about this little girl (who in my mind I called Beth) years ago, but never got past the first few (not so good) paragraphs. At the time, it was one of those “just sit down and write what comes to mind” days. When I saw the “fantasy” topic this week, I remembered Beth fantasizing about being a child underneath her tree and the rest of it wrote itself. Then I edited of course ;)

Now that it’s written though, it’s occurred to me that it could be part of something bigger…like an old journal entry of a now adult? I certainly wouldn’t be up to the challenge of writing as a pre-teen for chapters!

Thanks again for the feedback.

]]> By: Becslifeonline http://bleedingespresso.com/2007/01/sunday-scribblings-fantasy.html#comment-469 Becslifeonline Mon, 22 Jan 2007 17:51:00 +0000 http://siteground218.com/~bleedin2/?p=67#comment-469 This is an awesome piece! Very moving! Wow you sure can write! :-D Did you create this just as you were writing the blog or was it one you had written previously? This is an awesome piece! Very moving! Wow you sure can write! :-D Did you create this just as you were writing the blog or was it one you had written previously?

]]> By: Anonymous http://bleedingespresso.com/2007/01/sunday-scribblings-fantasy.html#comment-467 Anonymous Mon, 22 Jan 2007 16:28:00 +0000 http://siteground218.com/~bleedin2/?p=67#comment-467 Woah, Sognatrice, I'm fighting back the tears and, at the same time, wondering if this is something taken from one of your larger pieces? Nice...really very nice. Woah, Sognatrice, I’m fighting back the tears and, at the same time, wondering if this is something taken from one of your larger pieces? Nice…really very nice.

]]> By: The Other Girl http://bleedingespresso.com/2007/01/sunday-scribblings-fantasy.html#comment-461 The Other Girl Mon, 22 Jan 2007 02:08:00 +0000 http://siteground218.com/~bleedin2/?p=67#comment-461 That's a nice piece. Very sad and lovely. That’s a nice piece. Very sad and lovely.

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