Comments on: sunday scribblings: fantasy

By: Inconsequential

Inconsequential — Tue, 23 Jan 2007 09:40:00 +0000

poignant.

well written, smooth and emotive.
A very good short, or an excellent start to something bigger.

Go with it some more

By: bella

bella — Tue, 23 Jan 2007 03:00:00 +0000

It’s really good! I loved reading this.
Now, I’m going to read about the evil eye.

By: sognatrice

sognatrice — Mon, 22 Jan 2007 18:08:00 +0000

Wow, thanks for the compliments

I started writing about this little girl (who in my mind I called Beth) years ago, but never got past the first few (not so good) paragraphs. At the time, it was one of those “just sit down and write what comes to mind” days. When I saw the “fantasy” topic this week, I remembered Beth fantasizing about being a child underneath her tree and the rest of it wrote itself. Then I edited of course

Now that it’s written though, it’s occurred to me that it could be part of something bigger…like an old journal entry of a now adult? I certainly wouldn’t be up to the challenge of writing as a pre-teen for chapters!

Thanks again for the feedback.

By: Becslifeonline

Becslifeonline — Mon, 22 Jan 2007 17:51:00 +0000

This is an awesome piece! Very moving! Wow you sure can write! Did you create this just as you were writing the blog or was it one you had written previously?

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Mon, 22 Jan 2007 16:28:00 +0000

Woah, Sognatrice, I’m fighting back the tears and, at the same time, wondering if this is something taken from one of your larger pieces? Nice…really very nice.

By: The Other Girl

The Other Girl — Mon, 22 Jan 2007 02:08:00 +0000

That’s a nice piece. Very sad and lovely.